So the wannabe is sitting in the back part of a van and is dressed in black with gloves and a skimask on his head but not pulled down. The wannabe and his get away driver are discussing the heist that theyre gonna pull off. The driver isn't sure its gonna work but the wannabe keeps saying "Trust me, I know what I'm doing" and stuff like that. So the van stops as they get to the bank and the wannabe pulls a handgun out that was tucked in his belt in the back and pulls down the skimask and says something like "Alright, wish me luck"
He opens the van door and jumps out and you can either just hold the camera on the driver as he watches the wannabe run up to the bank or you can cut and watch the wannabe.... your choice.
If you just follow the driver, you see him looking anxiously out the windshied, then he gets a puzzled look on his face, then suddenly the wannabe comes running back into the van.
If you follow the wannabe, you see him run up to the bank, he gets to the door and pulls on the handle, but its locked, he jiggles the handle and then pulls really hard with both hands but its locked. He runs to the other side of the building but theres no other doors. He runs back to the door and you see him stop and look closely at the door and then he runs back.
So once the wannabe gets back into the van, he closes the door and pulls off the mask. The driver asks "What happened?"
Wannabe: "Did you know that banks are closed on Saturdays?"
Driver: "Really? ... Since when?"
Wannabe:"Who knows, but the sign says they closed Friday at 3pm and don't open again til Monday at 10 AM"
Driver:"Soooooo, we'll just come back later?"
Wannabe:"I dunno, just... get us out of here"
Whaddya think?
3 comments:
I think we could pull this video off in under a minute. So maybe we could make it the Wanna-be Criminal, and have him fail at a couple other attempts at crime. Something small before the attempted robbery, like speeding. Just a thought.
You could have him attempt to break into a house with his friend. They can start off with them running all the way across the street with one of those things that knock down doors and when they hit the door they just bounce off and land in the yard. Then the maid can answer the door when there getting up. I'm not sure what to do after that but it could include them getting into a fight with the maid inside. Then after they win the battle in some ridiculous way they could try to use the trampoline in the backyard to bounce things off the second floor of the house but instead the TV or whatever items falls through the trampoline.
Steve I like your idea, but I think this it's too large and should be posted as it's own video on the stp Writers page. Also I think it would be funny if the things they throw on the trampoline bounce back up into the house.
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